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the Sixth Sense by ~litlebunnyfoofoo:iconlitlebunnyfoofoo:

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She has a tendency to dream
whether it's day or night
asleep or awake
the dreams never cease...
a growing power on her since birth

She used to visit the dream world
only to escape from her unsatisfying reality
with time, she befriended the eluding fairies
dancing with them in the enchanted woods

Not a drop of rain ever fell on the ground
the aroma of forever spring from every flower
heavenly music from the whispering leaves
the warmth of the purest light
the sweet fruits of peace of the spirit

Don't try to ground me down
cause i fantasize of walking on water
don't tell me i'm being blind
for i see flowers blooming on scorched earth
Don't condemn my dream to a "never will be"
I know better, i have a Sixth Sense.
©2004-2009 ~litlebunnyfoofoo
:iconlitlebunnyfoofoo:

Author's Comments

just an old poem, finished last night.
the general idea was well, my tendency to dream all of the time.
and the five senses. (3rd stanza)

so yeah..it's not that good but whatev.

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:iconacidangel:
~acidangel Jan 21, 2004, 3:16:53 PM
Inspirational, I like it. :)

--
Music won't save you from anything but silence,
not from heartbreak, not from violence.
:iconlitlebunnyfoofoo:
~litlebunnyfoofoo Jan 21, 2004, 11:40:02 PM
eisai parawros. but thank you nonetheless. :)

--
well you can leave me whenever you like.
no strings attached..unless we are doing bondage at the time.
:iconshaunathanblaze:
=shaunathanblaze Feb 9, 2004, 10:56:56 AM
when my sister was little she use to lock herself in a pantry with just enough from for her to stand and she would stand in there for amazingly long periods of time and when she came out she would tell you she was in lisa land..... i don't know what happened in there but it must have been pretty magical!

ok anyway

lovely poem indeed your last stanza is very powerful
dreams are a creative fuel
and without them we would all be stuck in THIS reality how scary is that!? =)


-blaze...

--
I'm a perfectionist and a fuck up.
:iconlitlebunnyfoofoo:
~litlebunnyfoofoo Feb 11, 2004, 1:33:36 PM
heh aww how sweet what your sister did. :)

i also have made up imaginary friends (i always knew they were imaginary of course hehe)

reality sucks a hairy monkey's ass.
but we have to live in it from time to time.
sadly. heh.

--
well you can leave me whenever you like.
no strings attached..unless we are doing bondage at the time.
:iconenoughsoap:
~enoughsoap Feb 13, 2004, 7:37:24 AM
Aaaaw, i really like this poem.
Its so very optimistic!

Diona bebe, eisai megalh kalitexnida.
For real, respect! ;)


:blowkiss:

--
::With enough soap, one could blow up just about anything!::
:iconlitlebunnyfoofoo:
~litlebunnyfoofoo Feb 13, 2004, 5:10:56 PM
emena den me poluarese..kala..eidika to telos :S
mpempe

poa ti pswlokruo [/asxeto]

thank you bebe mou..but dont be silly. heh :)
<3333
*mwaaah*

--
well you can leave me whenever you like.
no strings attached..unless we are doing bondage at the time.
:icondeadrockgrrl:
~deadrockgrrl Feb 22, 2004, 4:31:53 PM
its pretty
it made me smile
it made me wonder
it made me think sweet little things

:heart: :+fav:
:iconlitlebunnyfoofoo:
~litlebunnyfoofoo Feb 22, 2004, 8:00:52 PM
aww now this made me smile
i'm honoured little missy <3

--
well you can leave me whenever you like.
no strings attached..unless we are doing bondage at the time.
:icontranslucent-fairy:
~translucent-fairy Mar 5, 2004, 12:50:31 PM
'Don't try to ground me down
cause i fantasize of walking on water
don't tell me i'm being blind
for i see flowers blooming on scorched earth
Don't condemn my dream to a "never will be"
I know better, i have a Sixth Sense.'
that is simply fantastic, u r so talented!:clap:
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